This is great, I love the smooth coloring, the point of view, and how you used plane changes on the suits so that nothing is confusing. One thing that I think would help define the soccer field a little more is maybe adding some lines on the grass section (like how modern soccer fields have them, and maybe you can even make them neon-colored or something to make them look more futuristic?). I also like how the sky seems stormy and adds to the mood!
That charging soccer suit looks like it could crash through anything. It's a pretty fierce standoff between two tanky looking vehicles. Two thoughts, the environment composition looks a little forced inside your frame. I also think it looks a little dark compared to today's soccer fields which have major lights over head lighting everything up.
I think you can keep the same setup for the vehicles and shift the background a bit so that everything feels a bit farther away and then it might not feel as forced. I like the color palette and that you didn't try to shove complete views of both vehicles, cutting of the one adds movement or action.
This is great, I love the smooth coloring, the point of view, and how you used plane changes on the suits so that nothing is confusing. One thing that I think would help define the soccer field a little more is maybe adding some lines on the grass section (like how modern soccer fields have them, and maybe you can even make them neon-colored or something to make them look more futuristic?). I also like how the sky seems stormy and adds to the mood!
ReplyDeleteThat charging soccer suit looks like it could crash through anything. It's a pretty fierce standoff between two tanky looking vehicles. Two thoughts, the environment composition looks a little forced inside your frame. I also think it looks a little dark compared to today's soccer fields which have major lights over head lighting everything up.
ReplyDeleteI think you can keep the same setup for the vehicles and shift the background a bit so that everything feels a bit farther away and then it might not feel as forced. I like the color palette and that you didn't try to shove complete views of both vehicles, cutting of the one adds movement or action.
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