The focal area is nice and well rendered, but the rest looks unfinished. The mouth area on the wasp looks kind of mushy and undefined. Ethan's sweatshirt also looks mushy, and I think it's because you're using white to describe the highlights on it. On cloth like that, the highlights aren't going to go towards white. They'll just take the local color and make it more intense, brighter and more saturated. I like the way you rendered out Ethan's extended arm, but I think that hand is a little big.
Man, I've said it before, and I'll say it again: you have a gift for shape. I love the way you're playing straights against curves in the robot design, and contrasting detail (small shapes) with rest area (big shapes). It's a very appealing design. I also like the scorch marks, that's a nice touch that helps tell the story.
I really like the cockpit, but I want the background leg to fad into the back more or be a bit darker. I feel like Ethan's head gets lost in it, but haveing a bit more detail to his face might make it pop a bit more from it. I do like the feel of it, with more vibrant colors on the wasp's face and it feels like it has more emotions than Ethan, I kinda like that.
The focal area is nice and well rendered, but the rest looks unfinished. The mouth area on the wasp looks kind of mushy and undefined. Ethan's sweatshirt also looks mushy, and I think it's because you're using white to describe the highlights on it. On cloth like that, the highlights aren't going to go towards white. They'll just take the local color and make it more intense, brighter and more saturated. I like the way you rendered out Ethan's extended arm, but I think that hand is a little big.
ReplyDeleteMan, I've said it before, and I'll say it again: you have a gift for shape. I love the way you're playing straights against curves in the robot design, and contrasting detail (small shapes) with rest area (big shapes). It's a very appealing design. I also like the scorch marks, that's a nice touch that helps tell the story.
ReplyDeleteI really like the cockpit, but I want the background leg to fad into the back more or be a bit darker. I feel like Ethan's head gets lost in it, but haveing a bit more detail to his face might make it pop a bit more from it. I do like the feel of it, with more vibrant colors on the wasp's face and it feels like it has more emotions than Ethan, I kinda like that.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all the feed back guys! merry christmas!
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